Alot you can improve
Hmm... I don't know where to start exactly.
I didn't feel any kind of good context, try picking a story or something like...
- Introduction - Normal day - Problem Emerges - Attempt to solve - Solved
Audio handling and picking out a track that works with your animation and if the animation gets longer than the sound track, it would be fitting to choose a track that both works with the animation and is loop friendly.
Remember, sometimes quality doesn't have to mean popularity. Even stick figures can make it to the frontpage if they've got a funny point or reach out to the right audience, though I suppose they'd have to be flowing also in the animation itself, not looking different from time to time or you can't see what they do. But ofcourse, as an artist you'd want to constantly improve your graphics materials, getting more advanced, though it takes time and practice.
Adding voices is usually a good way to create a good atmosphere, if you have voice actors or you're voice acting yourself while having fun pitching it and such.
I hope this review was useful to you ^_^
A bit short
Quite interesting, however it's too short in my opinion and it would be frustrating to browse around to watch the other parts later on.
My advice would be to take it off newground for the time being and keep working on it until you get some satisfying length, got potential for sure.
Most other clock crew animations I've seen didn't satisfy me too well... somehow I found this one quite funny, though a bit short.
Honestly, it made me smile =)
cool glad you enjoyed it
Can get better!
It's very cute and amusing, a few tips on how you might be able to improve it, If you're keen on actionscript or can get someone else who's good at it.
Maybe sort the clothes and everything and get it more organized, it easily got quite messy ^^' perhaps make them stick to a certain window or so when they're not dragged close enough to the character, like some kinda thumbnail windows.
and a wee graphical tip, I think they'd look even greater if you highlighted and shaded a bit ^_-
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