Mattea-and-Synthia's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ninja Crap]

Alot you can improve

Hmm... I don't know where to start exactly.
I didn't feel any kind of good context, try picking a story or something like...
- Introduction - Normal day - Problem Emerges - Attempt to solve - Solved

Audio handling and picking out a track that works with your animation and if the animation gets longer than the sound track, it would be fitting to choose a track that both works with the animation and is loop friendly.

Remember, sometimes quality doesn't have to mean popularity. Even stick figures can make it to the frontpage if they've got a funny point or reach out to the right audience, though I suppose they'd have to be flowing also in the animation itself, not looking different from time to time or you can't see what they do. But ofcourse, as an artist you'd want to constantly improve your graphics materials, getting more advanced, though it takes time and practice.

Adding voices is usually a good way to create a good atmosphere, if you have voice actors or you're voice acting yourself while having fun pitching it and such.

I hope this review was useful to you ^_^

[Superman VS Vageta]

A bit short

Quite interesting, however it's too short in my opinion and it would be frustrating to browse around to watch the other parts later on.

My advice would be to take it off newground for the time being and keep working on it until you get some satisfying length, got potential for sure.

[Bulletin: tree v puppy]

Surprised me

Most other clock crew animations I've seen didn't satisfy me too well... somehow I found this one quite funny, though a bit short.
Honestly, it made me smile =)

smackhouse responds:

cool glad you enjoyed it

[The Frontier OP Theme]

Great!

I've got nothing to say about improvement, because that's great, keep up the good work, I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Magicman-DX responds:

thank you very much of it .i really appreciate it!!^-^

[Drawing Contest #4 : Rage]

I've watched all of the episodes now, and must say

They're lovely, the idea of creating a drawing contest is just too great, it's very entertaining and funny at the same time, I love it. You're one of my few favourites, right behind Legendary Frog ^_~

Oh, and I believe you also wanted this:
Vote: P1

Keep up the good work! Respond if you feel like =^.^=

ForestXion responds:

thank you !
heh i try to make it better

[bumble bee madness]

Well...

The music keeps playing because you haven't got any actionscript telling the movie to stop playing it.
and I believe if you get some more tutorials and such you can become pretty successful.
But if animating isn't really your thing it's ok, you can always keep making nice 3D art ^_~

[Service Announcement]

Totally agree with you.

Our animations isn't going to contain porno and no blood splatting all over the place. I thought it was pretty unfair as I checked out some other animations and they get alot higher rating. People can get on frontpage by just focusing on one thing, either humor, porn or violence. People don't see "the whole thing" about the animation. If you take me for an example, I vote depending on graphics, animation itself, choice of music, sound quality, directing and humor if it was meant to be funny.
One day I saw a pretty crappy animation and I read some of the reviews like "The music was awesome! You get my 5!" (10 10 10 10 10) ........like omg, we're not here to only rate music! That makes me so irritated...

stoners-lunchbox responds:

Exactly the same on this side, man. Exactly the same. And this is STILL a point that part of the public fails to see. This was gonna cause uproar for sure, but in the end the viewers who know what iim talkin' about will tell me almost the same thing as you. Something which not every viewer has told me (thought for the most part they did).

Anyway, thanks for the feedback. Really appreciate it.